Rhianna Flett

After creating our first draft of the magazine advert, we noticed a few flaws that we wished to change. Firstly, the black outline around the band looked unprofessional. By removing this, the advert flowed together much nicer and overall looked more appealing. Next, we decided to make everything more central. That way it was easier to read and the your eyes gradually follow down the advert, ensuring all important information is noticed. We moved the inset image of the album cover up and slightly in, as it was unprofessional to have it resting against the edges of the advert. We also made the writing of "COSMIC" and "HAIR" the same, in order to create syngery throughout, and to match the album cover.